doc: reword text a bit

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Girish Ramakrishnan
2016-12-13 17:34:11 -08:00
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@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ work fine. Choosing a domain name at any other level like `cloudron.example.com`
work.
* `--provider` is the name of your VPS provider. If the name is not on the list, simply
choose `generic`. The `generic` provider mostly will work fine.
choose `generic`. In most cases, the `generic` provider mostly will work fine.
If the Cloudron does not complete initialization, it may mean that
we have to add some vendor specific quirks. Please open a
[bug report](https://git.cloudron.io/cloudron/box/issues) in that case.
@@ -127,16 +127,16 @@ we have to add some vendor specific quirks. Please open a
Optional arguments for installation:
* `--tls-provider` is the name of the SSL/TLS certificate backend. Defaults to Let's encrypt.
If Let's encrypt is not wanted, specifying `fallback` will always use the fallback wildcard certificate.
Specifying `fallback` will setup the Cloudron to use the fallback wildcard certificate.
Initially a self-signed one is provided, which can be overwritten later in the admin interface.
This may be useful for non-public installations.
Optional arguments used for update and restore:
* `--version` is the version of Cloudron to install. By default, the setup script installs
the latest version. This is useful when restoring a Cloudron from a backup.
the latest version. You can set this to an older version when restoring a Cloudron from a backup.
* `--restore-url` is an URL to the backup to restore to.
* `--restore-url` is a backup URL to restore from.
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ already! In this unlikely case, simply delete the server and start over.
Once the setup is done, you can access the admin page in the future at `https://my.<domain>`.
**If apps do not start after installation, a server restart may be required to let bootloader changes come into action.**
**If apps do not start after installation, a server restart may be required to let bootloader changes take effect.**
## DNS
@@ -211,9 +211,9 @@ The Cloudron creates encrypted backups once a day. Each app is backed up indepen
backups have the prefix `appbackup_`. The platform state is backed up independently with the
prefix `backup_`.
By default, backups reside in `/var/backups`. Having backups reside in the same location as the
server instance is dangerous and it must be changed to an external storage location like `S3`
as soon as possible.
By default, backups reside in `/var/backups`. Please note that having backups reside in the same
physical machine as the Cloudron server instance is dangerous and it must be changed to
an external storage location like `S3` as soon as possible.
### Amazon S3